BEC國際商務(wù)英語初中級考試中，商務(wù)接待書信創(chuàng)作也是較為普遍的文章體裁。一封好的商業(yè)服務(wù)書信應(yīng)當(dāng)反映出語言當(dāng)然精煉、行文流暢、可讀性高的健身培訓(xùn)設(shè)計(jì)風(fēng)格。針對這類種類的創(chuàng)作，大家應(yīng)當(dāng)留意什么難題，要怎么寫才語言及時、表述含意及時?下文為大家詳細(xì)分析BEC商務(wù)英語初級考之商務(wù)寫作，一起來看看吧。

　　一、當(dāng)然

　　商業(yè)服務(wù)書信的創(chuàng)作務(wù)必務(wù)求“當(dāng)然”，不可以滿篇全是落伍的商業(yè)服務(wù)行語。商業(yè)服務(wù)書信規(guī)定可讀性強(qiáng)。

　　為了更好地使信讀起來生動活潑，寫信人應(yīng)當(dāng)盡量減少應(yīng)用簡單的語言，務(wù)求使語言構(gòu)造富有轉(zhuǎn)變?？蓱?yīng)用的方式有：

　　1、 轉(zhuǎn)變語法構(gòu)造

　　轉(zhuǎn)換語句的語法構(gòu)造也可提升 信文的可讀性。寄信時不必千篇一律地應(yīng)用同一種表達(dá)方式。

　　2、提高書信的可讀性，還應(yīng)留意應(yīng)用精煉的語言

　　商業(yè)服務(wù)書信務(wù)必語言精煉，能用一個英語單詞的地區(qū)盡可能不必應(yīng)用好幾個英語單詞。

　　比如： 高信息冗余語言

　　Inasmuch as we require active consideration prior to making a decision, I am afraid that, in the circumstances, you will have to wait. .

　　低信息冗余語言

　　As we need to consider before making a decision, I am afraid you will have to wait.

　　二、商業(yè)服務(wù)書信的語氣

　　商業(yè)服務(wù)書信中寫信人應(yīng)用哪樣語氣十分關(guān)鍵，這能夠體現(xiàn)出寫信人和收信人中間的關(guān)聯(lián)。

　　積極主動的語氣

　　下列事例上邊三個語句選用提“中性”的語氣，而下邊相對的三個語句語氣則看起來積極主動。這類積極主動的語氣能夠使一個語句聽上來更有誠心。

　　中性

　　I am in receipt of your order for 250 pairs of Niky ?Conga? sports shoes. .

　　You failed to send your order to us before the new prices were introduced. ..

　　We cannot devote much time to your visit as the March Sales figures are being compiled and we are very busy. ..

　　積極主動

　　Thank you for your recent order for 250 pairs of Niky ?Conga? sports shoes.

　　Unfortunately, we did not receive your order before the new prices were introduced

　　We shall devote as much time to your visit as our hectic schedule will permit

　　以您為本的語氣

　　寄信時要盡量讓收信人覺得就是你親息寫信她們。

　　詞組：

　　以我來

　　We shall be able to install Cable TV shortly.

　　I am afraid we cannot deliver at the weekend.

　　I regret to inform you that we cannot refund your deposit unless you return the goods within a week.

　　以您為本

　　You will be pleased to hear that you will soon be able to receive Cable TV.

　　You can have your goods delivered any weekday.

　　I am pleased to inform you that you will be able to receive a full refund of deposit if you return the goods within a week.

　　三、編寫書信時下述幾個事兒務(wù)必防止：

　　1、斥責(zé)另一方犯錯誤

　　2、推脫自身的義務(wù)

　　3、輕視顧客的難題

　　4、回絕協(xié)助另一方

　　5、對另一方的協(xié)助絕不領(lǐng)情

　　以上就是為大家?guī)淼腂EC商務(wù)英語初級考之商務(wù)寫作，大家還要多引以為重，不要在創(chuàng)作的情況下做出不正確，而在考試時失分。更多商務(wù)商務(wù)英語初級寫作技巧，盡在滬江網(wǎng)，趕快關(guān)注吧。